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The response provides a general overview of the trends in agricultural water usage but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points. Grammar is mostly accurate, but the lexical range is limited, and coherence could be improved with better organization and linking of ideas.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Analyze the agricultural water usage trends in four countries over a decade.
Provide an overview of the trends for each country.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the agricultural water usage among the countries.
#Water Usage
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The given line chart illustrates how much water was used in agriculture in different countries from 2010 to 2019.
Overall, the number of water usage in agriculture in India was the highest among all. Also, noteworthy was that all the countries followed an ascending trend.
In 2010, ranked in first place was India, with 500. This was followed by the number of water usage in China, with 450. Next came Brazil, with 300. Finally, the number of agricultural water usage in Australia was 200.
Thereafter, India experienced a fluctuation in the first 3 years, before an ascending trend was recorded, to nearly 600 in 2019. Meanwhile, the number of agricultural water usage in China sharply rose to approximately 500 in 2019. Moreover, Brazil followed a similar ascending trend, at nearly 350 in 2019. Finally, Australia witnessed a significant rise in the number of water usage in agriculture, to nearly 260 in 2019.