IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6
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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains several inaccuracies and lacks clarity in some parts. Improvements in grammatical accuracy and a more precise description of trends and data points would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The line chart illustrates the percentage of renewable energy consumption in four European countries (France, Spain, Italy, and Sweden) between 2005 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Describe the general trends for renewable energy consumption in each country.
Highlight any years with significant changes or fluctuations.
Compare the renewable energy consumption trends among the countries.
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Submitted Answer
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The given illustration showcases the 15 years of data about the percentage of usage of renewable energy in France, Italy, Spain, and Sweden. The steep slope of 15 years of history of Sweden depicts some major
changes
where the energy consumption was only 30 percent in 2005. however
, each year, theis
country followed the same trend in increasing their usage of renewable energy resources and by the end of 2030, the percentage doubled as compared to the data from 2005.On the other hand, the three remaining countries, France, Spain, and Italy, followed a gentle slope in the given time period regarding the use of energy resources.
italy
started off with the 5% usage in the 2005 while raised it to 20% at the end of 2024. moreover
, the Spain and France were at the 15 and 10% in 2005 and increased it to 30 and 25% by 2020. So, the given data on energy consumption shoed
that the Sweden showed the major fluctuation in its energy consumption trend as compared to the remaining three countries.