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The response provides a basic overview of the trends in online spending but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while the data is generally accurate but not well-explained.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Examine the trends in average online spending per user in four different countries over a six-year period.
Identify the general trend for each country.
Note any significant increase or decrease in spending.
Compare the trends and highlight any similarities or differences.
#Retail and E-commerce
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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The given graphs illustrate the average online spending per
individuals
in the four particular
country
in a six year
.overall,the trend is in increasing order for every country in the
begening
the number used to be in small
but in growing year
their spending was also increased every
country has a
upwards trend.Turning into details, the
india
was the lowest spending of 200 in the
begening
year 2014
ane
uent
up to 350 in 2019.
canda
also has a starting number of 400 in the year 2014
and
it was up until it reach 500 in 2019.
Australia has
begening
of 450 in 2014 and reach up to 550 in the year 2019.Japan has also
a
upwards trend like other country it was about 500 in the
begening
year 500 and went up to 600 in year 2019.