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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks depth in analysis and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more precise vocabulary would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
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Writing Task

#Income Levels
#Table
The table below shows the average annual income levels in five different professions in New York City from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the changes in income levels for each profession over the given period.
Identify which profession experienced the most significant growth in income.
Discuss any noticeable fluctuations or trends.
YearDoctorEngineerTeacherNurseLawyer
20151500001200006000070000130000
20161550001250006200072000135000
20171600001300006300073000140000
20181650001350006500074000145000
20191700001400006600075000150000
20201750001450006800076000155000

Submitted Answer

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English:UK English
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The given data provides information on the
yearly
salary of Doctor, Lawyer, Engineer, Nurse, and
Teacher
in New York City between 2015 and 2020.
Overall, the highest compensation in New York is Doctor, followed by lawyer, and engineer and the fourth is Nurse and
lowest
is Teacher.
To begin with, In 2015, the leading the salary based
in
the provided data is Doctor, which is 150,000 and the second is Lawyer, which is 130,000.
Furthermnore
, the third in the data is Engineer, which is 120,000 and the fourth in the first year is Nurse, which is 70,000. Finally, the least in the year 2015 is Teacher, which is 60,000. By comparison, the salary of
Nurse
and
teacher
is doubled the salary of Doctor, Lawyer and Engineer.
In 2020, The top in the salary based on the data is Doctor, which is 175,000 and the second is Lawyer, which is 155,000. Moreover, the third in the data is Engineer, which is 145,000 and the fourth in the final year is Nurse, which is 75,000. The lowest in the final year is Teacher, which is 68,000. By comparison, both Doctor, Lawyer and Engineer increased in 25,000 in the year 2020.

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