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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, and the vocabulary is limited and repetitive.

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#Health and Fitness

#Table

The table data shows the percentage of adults engaging in regular physical activity across different countries over a five-year period.

Summarize the trends in physical activity levels over the five years.

Compare and contrast the data between the countries.

Identify any notable fluctuations or patterns in the data.

Year	USA (%)	UK (%)	Australia (%)	Japan (%)
2018	45	50	60	30
2019	47	52	62	32
2020	48	49	65	35
2021	46	51	63	34
2022	49	53	66	36

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The given data provides information on the ratio of individuals doing a daily exercise.

the table illustrates four countries, namely, USA, UK, Australia, Japan between 2018 and 2022 in all adult of the given countries.

Overall, the dominant in the number of adults doing exercise is the Australia, followed by, UK and USA and the least in the data is Japan.

To begin with, In 2018, Australia, is the leading which is 60%, followed by, UK, which is 50% and the third is the USA, which is 45% and the lowest in the first year is Japan, which is 30%. The different data can be seen in the year 2021 In which, Australia, is now 63% and increased by 3%. Whereas, the UK,

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increased to 51% and placed second in the year 2021. The third in the year 2021 is the USA, which is 46%. While, Japan, is the lowest based on the percentage provided in 2019.

in 2022, Australia still the highest, which is 66% and the UK, is 53% with a gradual increased by 3%. The third in the final year is the USA, which is 49% and rocketed by 2%. While, Japan, is the lowest, which is 36% and soared by 2% in the year 2022.

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