IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the task achievement is limited by inaccuracies in data interpretation.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The bar chart shows the percentage of people participating in cultural events in different cities in the USA in 2022.
Summarize the information by describing the general trends.
Identify any significant fluctuations or outliers in the data.
Compare participation rates between the cities.
#Cultural Participation
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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Words:114
Paragraphs:2
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The given bas details the percentage of participation in cultural events in five different cities in the USA in 2022. From overall
persective
, it is readily apparent
that the most city that participated in events is Chicago while Houston is the least.The highest engagement rate on cultural event is
belong
to Chicago where counted 70%. While it Los Angeles is lower around 5% which estimated around 65%. In the other hand New York showed the average percentage of the participation, more than a half of total amount, stood around 55%. The two rest the cities categorized as lower participating on the cultural celebration where Houston showed lowest at 40% and Phoenix reperesnt
50%.