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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 53 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 23 | |
| Lexical resource | 24 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Describe the bar chart data on the average monthly participation rates in various sports activities in four different countries.
Compare the participation rates across the different sports activities.
Identify any significant fluctuations or trends in the data.
Explain possible reasons for the differences in participation rates.
#Sports and Recreation
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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The given
barchart
illustrates the average monthly participaltion
rates in different games in four different countries. They are usa
,uk
,australia
and canada
.Overall,
australia
have
higher
participant
in swimming then canada
have
second higest
while uk
has lowest
this
shows
that austrailian
are mostly intrested
in swimming rather than other games.UK
have
higher
average participation in football
aprox
45 compratively
higher
than other countries. compratively
canada
have
second
highest
atlast
uk
have
lowest
average participant in foodball
.UK
have
higher
participants in basketball.At the end
australia
have
highest
participant
in tennis. UK
and CANADA have aprox
same number of participants in tennis.In conclusion,given data shows that
most of people
are
intrested
in swimming rather than other games.