IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6
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07 Nov 24, 07:01
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and comparison. Some grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and precision.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The bar chart compares the cultural event attendance rates in four European countries in 2021.
Describe the overall attendance rates in the given countries.
Identify and explain any notable differences between the countries.
Discuss any trends or patterns that can be observed from the data.
#Cultural Participation
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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The given bar chart illustrates the different attendance rates of cultural event in four countries in Europe in 2021.
In general, the attendance rate of the countries were relatively high, exceeding 50 percent, respectively reached 75%, 60%, 55%, 70%.
Comparing
to each other, there were still slight differences between the four countries. France owned the top rate of attendence
, which was three out of four, while Spain reached a second place of 70 percent of attendence
. The attendance rates of Germany and Italy were 60 percent and 55 percent, ranking the third and the fourth.It is obvious that in the given data of the four European countries, people are willing to participate in some cultural events to enrich their spare time as a part of
indigenous
community, embracing their everyday lives.