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The response provides a general overview of population trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more varied vocabulary would enhance clarity and engagement.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Describe the population growth trends in four different cities from 2010 to 2015.
Summarize the overall population growth trends.
Compare and contrast the population growth in the four cities.
Highlight any significant fluctuations or consistent patterns.
#Population Growth
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The figure shows information about the trends of population growth in several popular cities in the United States—New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, and Houston—over ten years starting from 2010 to 2015.
Overall, New York always consistently being the highest number of population compared to other cities, while Houston still remained the lowest over
these
5 year-period.As can be seen on the chart, all of these cities displayed almost
similiar
development over these years which had a slight steady increase and the rank always the same with New York lead in it with a starting point of 8 Million populations, followed by Los Angeles with around 3,9 Million as an initial amount, then Chicago with total for approximately 2,8 million, and the last was Houston with total for about 2,1 million.
The total number of New York's population almost the same
with
total of other three cities for these years that can be lead
if New York is the most popular city in the United States.