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The response provides a basic comparison of income levels across four regions but lacks clarity and precision. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but contain errors and limited variety. Coherence and cohesion need improvement for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Compare the income levels for four different regions in the United States from 2000 to 2010.
Analyze the overall trends in income levels for each region.
Identify periods of significant change.
Discuss potential reasons for the observed trends.
#Income Levels
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:171
Paragraphs:4
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The figure shows
comparation
of four differents
region
in the United Stastes about the income levels from 2000 to 2010.Overall, there are ten different points which mean the summarized once a year
and
we can see that the Northeast always be the highest level of income with the trends that always grow from the beginning. And the South was become
the lowest from the beginning.Firstly, the Northeast had the most steady increase over these ten years, started with 50,000 and ended in 60,000.
the
other regions also had the same increase until the year of 2003 for Midwest
and South before it started to decrease, and for west
, it was increasing until the year of 2007.Secondly, The Midwest and South were had the same progress
but
the Midwest just had the higher level of income,
they two
were also had the same trends point where in 2003 was the time when they are decreasing and 2007 was the time when they were started to increase again