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The response provides a basic comparison of the agricultural export data for 2018 and 2019, but lacks depth in analysis and explanation. There are some grammatical errors and the vocabulary is somewhat limited, affecting the overall clarity and coherence of the essay.

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Writing Task

#Agriculture

#Pie Chart

The pie charts below display the distribution of agricultural export products from five countries in 2018 and 2019.

Compare the distribution of export products between the two years.

Identify any significant changes or trends.

Discuss possible reasons for these changes.

2018

2019

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The export

indusrty

, particularly, agricultural exports play a vital role in the development of the global economy. Argentina, Canada, Mexico, Russia and South Africa are the major players

, however,

their contributions are not all the same, and tend to fluctuate each year. To assess this industry, this essay will differentiate the distribution charts of the five countries from 2018 and 2019, and also highlight potential justifications for these differences.

The distribution of agricultural exports varied in 2018 and 2019 for most countries. Argentina's share dropped from 15% to 10%, Canada's rose from 25% to 30%, Mexico reporting the same increase as Canada of 5% by increasing from 20% to 25%, Russia's share dropping from 25% to 20%. On the other hand, South africa's share stagnated at 15%, unlike other countries. Although countries such as Argentina's and Russia's percentage distributions dropped, Canada and Mexico benefitted.

Domestic issues and world relations play a huge role in the exports

market

leading to impactful implications in the agriculture aspects.

earthquake in one of the countries can hamper farms, thus directly affecting the produce.