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The response provides a general overview of the trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data referencing would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
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| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Evaluate the education level trends from 2015 to 2025 in the continents of Africa, Australia, Europe, and North America.
Summarize the trends for each continent.
Identify periods of rapid change or decline.
Compare the education level trends between the continents.
#Education Levels
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The education level trends from 2015 to 2025 of Africa varied widely compared to those of Austrailia, Europe and North America. Though they all had a similar slope, the education level of Africa
started
at 40 in 2015 and reached
just above 60 by 2025 (the minimum starting level for all of Austrailia Europe and North America). The highest
increase change for the continent of Africa was between 2018 and 2019; it saw a rapid jump from level 47 to 50.In Europe, the education level was the 3rd
highest
. It started
off at 60 in 2015 and reached
to around 79 by 2025. Just like all other continents, it didn't
experience a decline. Similar to Africa, it's
highest
increase change was also between 2018 and 2019; it rose from around level 66 to 69. Coming after Europe, Austrailia started
at level 65 and reached
to just about level 84 in 2025. Unlike Europe and Africa though, Austrailia's highest
increase change was between the years of 2023 and 2024. It bolted from level 76 to level 80.The continent with the
highest
level started
with a level of 70 and reached
an outsanding
level of 87. Even though it had the smalles
overall increase, it still lead
the education levels of all continents in all years, strengthening it's
position. It's
highest
increase change was also between 2018 and 2019, showing that in that year education was more focused on in Europe, Africa, and North America. The chart shows a positive increase in all countries showing that education and
it's
importance is always rising.