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The response provides a general overview of income trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data referencing would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Income Levels
#Line Chart
Analyze the changes in income levels for four European countries between 2005 and 2015.
Highlight the overall trends for each country.
Identify periods of significant growth or decline.
Discuss the possible factors influencing these trends.
Submitted Answer
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The data represents the variations in income levels in France, the UK, Italy, and Spain from 2005 to 2015.
Overall, all the 4
european
countries experiened
a decline at a certain point of time in the last 10 years. However, all 4 of them experienced a growth in their salary levels by the end of 2015 relative to their numbers in 2005.The UK experienced the most dramatic fluctuation. Their figure dipped from $32 000 to just over $28 000 in a span of just 2 years. Although, a rise began after 2009, and they came close to their income levels before the fluctuations took place.
France has tried
ro
maintain it's
lead consistenly
over the last 10 years. However, due to the decline in the year 2010, Italy had surpassed them by just over a few thousands with their constant income level growth rate. But the increase did not last long as Italy faced a major drop in the year 2012 and France was back on top. Italy is also the only country to expierence
a dip after the year 2012, and they've
still not rose
back to the highest income level yet.