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The response provides a general overview of the trends in education levels but lacks precision in data interpretation and specific details. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate, but there are some inaccuracies and limited variety in sentence structures.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Education Levels

#Line Chart

Describe the changes in education levels from 2010 to 2020 in four different countries: the United States, Germany, Japan, and Brazil.

Summarize the overall trends for each country.

Compare the education level trends between the four countries.

Identify any significant fluctuations or notable patterns.

Submitted Answer

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The data demonstrates the levels of education in 4 countries between the time period of 2010 and 2020. There

seem

to be a significant difference in each country's educational growth which includes the starting level and the final level. The nation in which the data represents include

United

States, Germany, Japan, and Brazil.

Over the span of 10 years, the level of intelligence in each country

experienced

significant growth. Among those 4 countries, the United States happens to be the nation with the highest increase in the level of intellectuality. These trends will then be followed by Brazil

coming

in second, Germany in third, and lastly Japan

coming

in last. Even though Japan

comes

last, it does not define the level of education the nation holds as it has a higher level in the early period. While Brazil has the second-most development in intellectual level, the country's final data

comes

in the lowest.

As for the drastic fluctuation stated in the data, the only pattern that stands out appears to be related to Japan. Between the year 2012 to 2013, Japan

experiences

a noticeable fall in intelligence level as the later result lower than the previous data.

All in all, the general trend for each country is

monochronic

as each of them

experiences

significant increase over the span of a decade. As for the comparative aspect in each level,

United

States holds the highest development over the course of 10

year

. While most country has increase every year, Japan is labeled as the only country in which the data

experiences

a downfall.

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Total Errors	15
Grammatical range and accuracy	6
Lexical resource	4
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2