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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The task achievement is limited by inaccuracies in data interpretation and insufficient detail in trend descriptions.
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Writing Task
#Climate Change
#Bar Chart
Evaluate the changes in the percentage of renewable energy consumption for four countries from 2000 to 2020 as depicted in the bar chart.
Summarize the trends in renewable energy consumption for each country over the 20-year period.
Identify which country had the most significant increase or decrease in renewable energy usage.
Compare the patterns of renewable energy consumption among the countries.
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The chart shows the information about the
propotition
changes who are consuming the renewable energy in the four country
between 22000 to 2020
.In the beginning of the period, the proposition of Germany was around 10%. The second is followed
by United States
with 7% and the lower percentage is china which stand at 2%.In 2010, Germany rose significantly 10% to 18%. Then
United states
increase tremendously which is 11% this is folllowed
by India and the last one is china.In the last year, the first position is still Germany with 33% which is Germany grows dramatically.
Futhermore
, USA climbs
markedly to 15% as well as China and India rose moderately 5 to 6%.Overall,
al
the country is go
up over the year and the highest percentage is Germany which means rose significatly
and then folllowed
by USA
, India and China.