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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more accurate description of trends would enhance the response.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Immigration and Emigration
#Line Chart
The chart presents the net migration rates in the United States, Mexico, Brazil, and Argentina from 2000 to 2010.
Analyze the trends in net migration for each country over the given period.
Identify any years where significant changes occurred and discuss possible reasons.
Compare the net migration rates among the countries and provide insights into regional migration patterns.
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The chart shows the
avrage
of numbers migration
in the United States, Mexico, Brazil, and Argentina from 2000 to 2010. It can see the highest number
about 160,000 in united states
in 2010. It can see the avrage
of migration in Braziland Argentina grow sharply from 2000 to 2010 it start
btween
15,000-20,000 and end between 30,000-45,000. The numbers decline
steadily from -30,000 to -45,000 in Mexico since 2000. The numbers in
United states
, Brazil, Argentina show an upward trend from 2000 to 2010, but in Mexico show a downward trend since 2000 to hit the lowest point in 2010, and the highest point of migration
avrage
in Mexico in 2000 about -30,000.