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Writing Task
#Housing
#Bar Chart
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households owning their homes in four different countries over a period of six years.
Describe the overall homeownership trends in each country.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the homeownership rates between the countries.
Submitted Answer
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The chart shows information about the proportion of households owning their homes in four different
nation
over a period of six years.Overall, Canada had the most proportion of homeownership in every year compare to other countries. Unlike
Germany
hat
had the least percentage of homeownership in a whole six year
compare to another nations. The percentage of households owning their home in Germany, Japan, and Canada were increased gradually every year. Otherwise, the US percentage were decreased in 2017.In Canada,
it's
percentage of homeownership was the highest every year and
it was reached 70% in 2020. On the other hand, had the lowest proportion of homeownership every year, in 2015 only hit 50% as the lowest number.In the US, the proposition of homeownership was increased
untuk
2016 with 65% but
it was decreased 0,5% in 2017.