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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and figures. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect coherence and task achievement, while data interpretation is not entirely accurate.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Energy Consumption
#Line Chart
Analyze the energy consumption in four European countries over a decade.
Describe the initial and final energy consumption levels for each country.
Highlight any notable fluctuations or steady trends.
Discuss which country had the highest and lowest consumption at the end of the period.
Submitted Answer
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The chart shows information about the
consumtion
of power in four European countries over a decade.At the beginning, France rose significantly with 700% of proportion this is followed
by United Kingdom
which stands at 600%. Then, Italy occupied third position with 500%. Lastly, Spain become the lowest energy consumption with 400% of proportion.In 2011 to 2013, France
increase
dramatically to 750%. whereas
, United Kingdom decrease tremendously, as the figure stands at 600% to 570%. Then, Italy and Spain climbed considerably which means the energy consumtion
is high.In 2014 to 2016, United Kingdom fall tremendously until the end of the period which stand at 560% to 500%. However, France
go
up rapidly with 750% of proportion to 820%. Futhermore
, Itali and Spain rose significantly over the next 5 years.Overall, the highest percentage is occupied by France this is followed by Italy and Spain which have the same pattern of chart, Nevertheless, United Kingdom increase slightly in the beginning but fall tremendously over the year.