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07 Jan 25, 15:08

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The response provides a general overview of the trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the analysis.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Transportation

#Line Chart

Analyze the trends in the number of passengers using public transportation in four major cities from 2000 to 2020.

Summarize the overall trend of public transportation usage in each city.

Identify and explain any significant fluctuations or patterns.

Compare the trends among the four cities and provide possible reasons for the similarities or differences.

Submitted Answer

Words181|Paragraphs3

English:

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The chart illustrates the trends in the number of passengers

using

public

transportation in four main cities from 2000 to. 2020. Overall, the number of passengers

using

public

transportation had been increased from 2000 to 2020 in four major cities. The most

public

transportation was

used

in Tokyo, on the other hand, Sydney was the lowest

public

transaportation

used

over

period

of time.

In New York, the number of people

using

public

transportation has been risen from 2.5 people in 2000 to 4.5 people in 2020, which

the is

highest

growth among other cities. The trend of passengers

using

public

transportation in Tokyo increased from 4 people to 5 people over 20 years.

The growth in

number

of passengers

using

public

transportation in London and Sydney were similar, which increased by 1.25 people from 2000 to 2020. In London, there were 1.75 people

using

public

transportation in 2000 and grew to 3 people in 2020. Also, in Sydney, there were 1.25 people

used

publice

transportation in 2000 and

rose up

to 2.5 people in 2020.

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Total Errors	16
Grammatical range and accuracy	5
Lexical resource	6
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2