IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 6 (Academic Training)
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25 Mar 25, 15:42
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and comparison of trends. Some grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and precision.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Education Levels
#Table
The table below provides data on the completion rates of secondary education in different countries for the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant trends or anomalies.
| Country | 2000 (%) | 2005 (%) | 2010 (%) | 2015 (%) |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Canada | 75 | 78 | 80 | 83 |
| UK | 70 | 72 | 75 | 77 |
| China | 60 | 65 | 70 | 75 |
| Mexico | 55 | 57 | 60 | 62 |
| Russia | 80 | 82 | 83 | 85 |
| South Korea | 85 | 87 | 88 | 90 |
Submitted Answer
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The chart illustrates the statistics on completion rates of
secondary
education in different countries like Canada, UK, China, Mexico, Russia and South Korea from 2000 to 2015. The data is measured in percentage.To
analayze
the given table, we begin by taking a closer look at the data presented and
it is very clear that the percentage of secondary
education was significantly increased over the years.In 2000, South Korea had the largest number of students completing their
secondary
education to up 85% whereas Mexico had the least to around 55%. In addition, the students in other counteries
like Canada, UK, China, and Russia accounted for 75%, 70%, 60%, and 80% respectively.Over the span of 5 years, there was
gradual
spike in the percentage of students who finished secondary
education. In 2005, the percentage of students with secondary
education in Canada increased to 78%, UK
to 72%, Mexico to 57%, Russia to 82%, and South Korea to 87%. The significant growth was seen in China from 60% to 65%. Moreover, the percentage continued to rise in 2010 in all the above countries.According to the given table, the
maximumum
percentage of school pupils who completed their secondary
school in 2015 was 90% in South Korea and minimum
was 62% in Mexico.