IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6

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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and comparison of trends. Some grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and precision.

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Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Education Levels

#Table

The table below provides data on the completion rates of secondary education in different countries for the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Make comparisons where relevant.

Highlight any significant trends or anomalies.

Country	2000 (%)	2005 (%)	2010 (%)	2015 (%)
Canada	75	78	80	83
UK	70	72	75	77
China	60	65	70	75
Mexico	55	57	60	62
Russia	80	82	83	85
South Korea	85	87	88	90

Submitted Answer

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The chart illustrates the statistics on completion rates of

secondary

education in different countries like Canada, UK, China, Mexico, Russia and South Korea from 2000 to 2015. The data is measured in percentage.

analayze

the given table, we begin by taking a closer look at the data presented

and

it is very clear that the percentage of

secondary

education was significantly increased over the years.

In 2000, South Korea had the largest number of students completing their

secondary

education to up 85% whereas Mexico had the least to around 55%. In addition, the students in other

counteries

like Canada, UK, China, and Russia accounted for 75%, 70%, 60%, and 80% respectively.

Over the span of 5 years, there was

gradual

spike in the percentage of students who finished

secondary

education. In 2005, the percentage of students with

secondary

education in Canada increased to 78%,

to 72%, Mexico to 57%, Russia to 82%, and South Korea to 87%. The significant growth was seen in China from 60% to 65%. Moreover, the percentage continued to rise in 2010 in all the above countries.

According to the given table, the

maximumum

percentage of school pupils who completed their

secondary

school in 2015 was 90% in South Korea and

minimum

was 62% in Mexico.

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Lexical resource	5
Coherence & cohesion	3
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