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The response effectively describes the trends in rental prices across the four cities, with accurate data representation. However, the use of vocabulary and grammatical structures could be more varied to enhance clarity and engagement.
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Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
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Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Housing
#Line Chart
The line chart indicates the changes in rental prices for apartments in four different cities from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the trends in rental prices for apartments in each city over the given period.
Identify which city had the highest and lowest rental prices in 2020.
Discuss any significant fluctuations or steady trends observed in the data.

Submitted Answer

Words152|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
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The chart illustrates the
apartment
price for renting in San Fransisco, Berlin, Hong Kong, and Dubai between 2015 and 2020.
Overall, the
apartment
rent price in Hong Kong, San Fransisco, and Berlin increased, while Dubai saw a drop in the given period. The highest price came from Hong Kong, whereas the lowest price was from Berlin.
Hong Kong had the highest price among
four
cities, with a price that started at 4000 and continuously rose and reached its peak at 4500
at
the final year. The
second highest
price came from San Fransisco, which had a similar trend
with
Hong Kong, with 3500 in 2015 and reached 4000 in 2020.
Meanwhile, Berlin with the lowest price of around 1200 at the beginning, had steadily climbed to 1500 in 2020. On the other hand, Dubai was the only city with a fall, consistently decreased from 2000 to around 1700 in just six years.

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