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The response provides a general overview of the educational levels in India and South Africa, but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains some grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data representation would enhance the overall quality of the answer.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Education Levels

#Pie Chart

The pie charts compare the educational levels in India and South Africa in 2023. Describe the data presented.

Identify the largest and smallest educational categories in each country.

Analyze the proportion of tertiary education in both countries.

Note any significant differences or trends.

India

South Africa

Submitted Answer

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The chart depicts a comparison of 5 levels of education in 2023 in two countries: Indian and South Africa. The levels of the education were: No formal,

primary

secondary

, bachelor, and

master degree

Overall,

secondary

educational level was by far the highest degree achieved by almost half of the citizens in both countries. On the other hand, applying for a

master degree

was the least popular

one

with only 5% of the population being familiarized with.

Looking at both countries,more than half of their residents were educated and holders of

primary

and

secondary

educational degrees.

Secondary

schools

accomodated

the highest number of students. This category was 5% larger in South Africa (40%) than in Indian(35%). Moreover,

primary

education was

the second place reflected

55% of the people in total for both countries. In contrast, Indians were more involved in

primary

levels than South

Africans

showing a difference of 5%.

Similarly, bachelor degree holders were on the third place, they recorded more percentages in India than in South African with 20% and 18% respectively. Other categories like

non formal

educators and master degrees were less than 20% of the population generally.

Non formal

educators among South Africans were 2% more than

indians

, while

master degree

holders had equal ratios in both countries.

IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5

Writing Task

India

South Africa

Submitted Answer

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Total Errors	20
Grammatical range and accuracy	10
Lexical resource	5
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2