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The response provides a general overview of water usage trends in four European cities, but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains some grammatical inaccuracies. Improved coherence and more accurate data referencing would enhance the overall quality of the analysis.
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| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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Writing Task
#Water Usage
#Line Chart
Analyze the water usage patterns of four European cities from 2000 to 2020 based on the given Line Chart data.
Describe the general trends in water usage in each city.
Identify any periods of significant increase or decrease in water usage.
Highlight any years where the water usage in one city diverged significantly from the others.
Submitted Answer
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The chart below displays the water consumption of 4 different cities in Europe from 2000 to 2020. By dissecting the
imformation
in the chart below, all cities displaying
a harmonious increase in water consumption as shown
, with little difference in trend for the city of Berlin. The chart shows
that Rome used
the least water while Berlin used
the most water.From 2000 to 2020, Rome
used
approximately 70 litres
of water at the beginning, which skyrocketed to 170 litres
in the end of
year range. At a similar increase rate, comes in the second place
Madrid, which used
80 litres
and maximized to 180 litres
. Thirdly comes in Paris, which was 90 litres
approximately in 2000 and doubled to 190 litres
almost. Lastly, Berlin, which was 100 litres
and ended up using
220 litres
in 2020, making it the most consuming city of water in Europe across these 4 cities.Meanwhile, that increase trend of Berlin's consumption led to it having significant divergence in water usage.
In 2002 to 2004, it inflated from 90
litres
to 130
litres
, and from 2008 to 2009, it slightly rose from 150
litres
to 160
litres
, and it diverged from 2019 to 2020 by 10
litres
, which
shows
that
its
almost
using
too much water by now, in 2025.
This trend
showed
how much Berlin significantly maximized its water consumption compared to other countries, making it the most consuming water city in Europe, compared to the other given cities.