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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing specific trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect clarity, while vocabulary use is adequate but not varied.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Cultural Participation

#Bar Chart

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of citizens attending cultural events (such as theater, music concerts, and art exhibitions) in three different regions of Australia in 2018.

Describe the participation rates for each type of cultural event in the three regions.

Identify any regions with particularly high or low participation rates.

Discuss any observed trends or notable features in the data.

Submitted Answer

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The bar graph

show

the rate of people who attend cultural events such as

theater

, music concerts, and art exhibitions alongside three different regions of Australia in 2018.

Overall, the portion of music concerts accounted for over 30%

each

region, the highest percentage is 40% in New South Wales.

Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the percentage of

theater

performances in Queensland hit a low of 20%, while the others

recoreded

over 20%. Also, the proportions of Music concerts and Art exhibitions made up for

same

percentage. Meanwhile, both

Theater

performances and Art exhibitions got

same

percentages as 25% of people in Victoria. On the one hand, the ratio of citizens who enjoy music concerts in New South Wales was the biggest part among those three events, followed

theater

performances and art exhibitions.

As you can see above the graph, people who live in those three regions in Australia enjoyed cultural events variously

but

they tended to

enjoyr

musci

concerts more.

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Total Errors	19
Grammatical range and accuracy	6
Lexical resource	8
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2