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The response provides a basic overview of income levels in Australian regions but contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies in data reporting. Improved coherence and more precise data interpretation would enhance the overall quality.

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Writing Task

#Income Levels

#Bar Chart

Assess the income levels in different regions of Australia over five years (2016-2020).

Describe the trends in income levels for each region.

Identify which region experienced the most significant change.

Compare the income levels of New South Wales and Victoria.

Submitted Answer

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English:

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Cohesion

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The bar graph provides information on the proportion of income in four places of Australia, namely, New South Wales, Victoria, Queensland, Western Australia. The given data provide information between the year 2016 and 2020.

Overall, The leading in the income level based on the data is New South Wales and second is Victoria and the third is Queensland and fourth in the

givern

bar chart is Western Australia.

To begin with, In 2016, New South Wales, is the

higest

on income

level

which is 50,000.

followed

by, Victoria which is 49,000, and the third is Queensland which is 45,000 and the least in the chart is Western Australia, which is the lowest based on the income level in 2016.

By comparison, New South Wales is 5,000

diffrences

with

Queensland.

The

diffrent

pattern can be observed in the year 2020, In which, New South Wales, is the greatest on income level which is 59,000.

followed

by, Victoria which is 55,000, and the third is Queensland which is 52,000 and the least in the chart is Western Australia, which is the lowest based on the income level in 2020 and had only 50,000

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Total Errors	15
Grammatical range and accuracy	4
Lexical resource	5
Coherence & cohesion	4
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