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The response accurately describes the data, highlighting key trends and comparisons. However, it could benefit from more varied vocabulary and a clearer logical flow to enhance coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Energy Consumption
#Bar Chart
Study the Bar Chart that compares renewable and non-renewable energy consumption in four Asian countries in 2021.
Outline the primary differences in energy consumption between renewable and non-renewable sources.
Compare the energy consumption patterns among the countries.
Mention any unique or noteworthy trends.
Submitted Answer
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The bar graph provides data on the comparison of
renewable
and non
-
renewable
energy consumption in China, India, Japan and South Korea in 2021.Overall, China has the greatest consumption for both groups. South Korea was the exact opposite of China, consuming the least. Each country
consume
lesser renewable
energy than non
-
renewable
energy, respectively.The top two countries with the most energy usage
is
China and India. Non
-
renewable
energy is very much used in China at 600 TWh, whilst, the use of renewable
energy only at 200 TWh. In India, both groups of energy are used less compared to China. With non
-
renewable
energy at about 450 TWh and renewable
energy around 150 TWh.In contrast, the two other remaining countries, which are Japan and South Korea, are grouped to the lower consumption of energy countries. Japan used 300 TWh of
non
-
renewable
energy and South Korea at just above 200 TWh. On the other hand, the usage of renewable
energy in Japan and South Korea are relatively the same at approximately 100 TWh and lower.