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The response effectively describes the trends in internet access across five countries, with accurate data representation. However, minor grammatical errors and occasional awkward phrasing slightly affect clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
The bar chart shows the percentage of households with internet access in five different countries from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the key trends shown in the bar chart.
Compare the internet access trends in each country.
Highlight any significant fluctuations or notable changes over the period.
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Submitted Answer
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of households with internet access from 2010 to 2020, in five countries: USA, Canada, Germany, Brazil, and Japan. Overall, it is evident that the
percetange
of each country has gradually increased over the given period.Japan has taken the lead for the highest percentage of households with internet access starting with 80% in 2010 extending to 90% in 2020. However, from 2018 to 2020, USA held the highest percentage at 90% in 2018, and at 95% in 2020. Additionally,
USA
started with 70% in 2010, which indicates an overall increase of 15%. Similarly, Germany ranked third from 2010 to 2018 beginning at 65% in 2010, 70% in 2012, 75% in 2014, 80% in 2016, 85% in 2018, and 90% in 2020. This reflects a 5% percent increase every two years over the fixed period, yet it elucidates that Germany and Japan equalize as second in rank at 90% in 2020.On the other hand, Canada and Brazil are
labeled
with lesser percentages of households with internet access. Canada places fourth
demonstrating a growth of 15% over the years, as it starts with 60% in 2010 and ends with 85% in 2020. While Brazil records the lowest percentage of all countries commercing at 50% in 2010, then 55% in 2012, 60% in 2014, 65% in 2016, 70% in 2018, and lastly 75% in 2020. Correspondingly to Germany, Brazil articulates a 5% increase every two years. Moreover, Brazil and Canada are the only two countries to steadily hold their ranks over the given period.