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The response accurately describes the data and trends from the bar chart, with clear organization and appropriate formality. However, minor grammatical errors and limited lexical variety slightly affect the overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
The bar chart shows the percentage of people participating in cultural events in different cities in the USA in 2022.
Summarize the information by describing the general trends.
Identify any significant fluctuations or outliers in the data.
Compare participation rates between the cities.
#Cultural Participation
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people involved in
cultural
events in five various states
namely; New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, Houston and Phoenix in the USA in 2022.Generally, Chicago demonstrated to be having the highest
participation
followed by Los Angeles with Houston showing the least participation among the five regions. Notably, New York and Phoenix had a competative
and close range of participation in cultural
events.In detail, in 2022,
Chicago
which was leading in cultural
events
engagement, had 70% of the population taking part in the function. On the other hand, Los Angeles followed chicago
closely in the number of persons participating by having approximately 65% of the multitude taking part in the event. Meanwhile, New York and Phoenix had a difference of about 5% in the numbers involed
where by
New York had a participation of approximately 55% while Phoenix had 50%. In contrast, Houston recorded the lowest percantage
of people taking part in cultural
events
with 40%.