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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more varied vocabulary would enhance the clarity and effectiveness of the analysis.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors8
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Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Energy Consumption
#Bar Chart
Compare the renewable energy consumption in different sectors in four US states in 2019.
Provide an overview of renewable energy consumption in each state.
Compare the consumption in residential, commercial, and industrial sectors.
Highlight any state with notably higher or lower consumption in a specific sector.

Submitted Answer

Words168|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Cohesion
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Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The bar charts provided comparison of the usage of renewable energy in California, Texas, New york, Florida in 2019.
Overall, California is the
highest
percentage consumption for Residential and commercial. While, Texas is the
highest
for Insdustrial and New york is the lowest usage of three categories.
In detail, It can be seen that both California and Texas is the
highest
usage in three categories. In which, California is the dominant in Residential with 250 TWh and commercial consumption is 300 TWh. On the other hand, Texas is the
highest
usage in industrial with 300 TWh.
Another pattern can be observed, which is the lowest consumption in four places in America. First is the usage in the residential for New york, which is 150 TWh while, in Florida, is 180 TWh. Second is commercial in which New york is still the least usage by 200 TWh whereas, Florida is 220 TWh and Finally the industrial consumption in which New york is 100 TWh while Florida is 150 TWh

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