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5.5
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04 Jan 25, 15:01
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The response provides a general overview of energy consumption across sectors in four countries, but contains several grammatical errors and lacks detailed data analysis. Improved coherence and more precise vocabulary would enhance clarity and task achievement.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response3

Writing Task

#Energy Consumption
#Bar Chart
Describe the energy consumption in various sectors across four countries in 2020.
Summarize the overall energy consumption in each country.
Compare the consumption in residential and industrial sectors.
Identify any significant discrepancies or trends.

Submitted Answer

Words108|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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The bar charts indicate the energy consumption in many sectors across four nations in 2020. The four countries are Canada, Germany, China and Brazail which all of them have the same trend of the energy usage with the most consumption in
industrial
sector, residential
andcommercial
respectively. There is a big different in energy consumption in
industrial
sector and
residential
sector in. Canada, Germany and China. However, in Brazil there
is
only
little
gap. The highest
comsumption
of energy is in China in
industrial
sector with 1,200 TWh of electricity usage. The lowest energy
comsumption
is in Canada in
commercial
sector with
approximatly
300 TWh of power usage.

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