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The response provides a clear overview of the deforestation rates in selected South American countries, but lacks depth in data analysis and contains some grammatical inaccuracies. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the overall quality of the answer.

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Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Environmental Issues

#Bar Chart

Describe the bar chart showing the annual deforestation rates (in hectares) in selected South American countries from 2010 to 2020.

Summarize the trends in deforestation rates over the given period.

Identify any countries that show significant increases or decreases in deforestation rates.

Compare the deforestation rates between the highest and lowest countries in 2020.

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The bar chart shown represents the annual deforestation rates (in hectares) of Brazil, Argentina, Peru, Colombia, and Venezuela throughout the years of 2010 to 2020. Within the ten years, it can be seen from the bar chart that all five South American countries have their own fair share of deforestation rates. Out of the five, Brazil has the highest deforestation rate with 800.000 hectares within the decade. In comparison, the country with the lowest rates of deforestation is

Venezuela

with only 50.000 hectares. With a 750.000 hectares difference in deforestation rates between the two countries, it can be concluded that there is a rapid

increase of

deforestation rates in Brazil throughout the years of 2010 to 2020.

Following Venezuela, Argentina has the

second lowest

deforestation rates within the decade with only 150.000 hectares. Peru and Colombia are

more closer

in difference of deforestation

rates

with Colombia having 180.000 hectares of deforestation whilst Peru has 200.000 hectares. In conclusion, these are the five countries listed by their rates of annual deforestation from highest to lowest: Brazil, Peru, Colombia, Argentina, and lastly Venezuela.

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