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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and the logical flow of ideas could be improved for better clarity.
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Writing Task

#Employment Sectors
#Bar Chart
Examine the changes in employment sectors in the United States from 2000 to 2020.
Identify the trends in each sector over the two decades.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Discuss potential reasons for these changes.

Submitted Answer

Words175|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The bar chart provides information on the
diffrences
in
ob
indutries
in
united States
between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, the highest in the final year based on the given bar chart is Services, followed by, Manufacturing and Agriculture.
To begin with, In 2000, the Services, had the highest based on the percentage with 50% and the second is the Manufacturing, which
is
40% and the least in the
employement
sector in the first year
is
Agriculture, with only 5%.
In addition, In 2010, the Services soared by 12%. Whereas, the Manufacturing, plummeted by, 10%. While, the Agriculture, decreased by, 2%. By comparison, it can be seen that both the Agriculture, and the Manufacturing, declining in the percentage.
In 2020, The Services, rocketed to 75% and the leading in the final year. Whereas, the Manufacturing, decreased by 10% and now 20% in the year 2020. While, the Agriculture, plummeted by 3% and now only 5% in the final year. It can be observed that the Manufacturing, and the Agriculture,
continously
declining in the past two decades.

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