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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and figures. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while the logical flow is disrupted by inconsistent data interpretation.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Transportation

#Bar Chart

The bar chart presents the annual number of public transport trips (in millions) made in Berlin, Madrid, Rome, and Amsterdam from 2015 to 2020.

Highlight the key trends over the period.

Compare the changes in each city.

Discuss any significant rises or falls in the data.

Submitted Answer

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The bar chart provides information about the total of

public

transport travels created in some countries in

europe

like Berlin, Madrid, Rome, and

amsterdam

between 2015 and 2020. Overall, the data showing that the rank of the number of transport is quite steady year by year, Berlin holds the highest number from the entire year. Contrarily, the whole year which keep having the least millions of

public

vehicles is

amsterdam

when it comes to Berlin, in 2015 it has up to 200 million

public

car trips, the trend exhibited the similar pattern in the following year until 2018, but the number has decreased into around 170 million in the last year,

madrid

is following on the 2nd rank which it has approximately 180 million

public

transports in 2018

and

it drops to 170 million

in the end of

the year from the previous year which is reach the highest number (200).

Rome and Amsterdam are the lowest number

this trend, they just 160 million and 150 million in the first year , and down to 150 and 130 in 202.0

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