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The response provides a general overview of the population trends but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the clarity and depth of the analysis.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Population Growth
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the population growth in four countries in Southeast Asia between 2005 and 2025, measured in millions.
Describe the overall population changes in the four countries.
Compare the population growth trends among the countries.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Submitted Answer
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The bar chart illustrates the number of population in Indonesa, Thailand, Malaysia and Vietnam from 2005 to 2025. The figures are measured in millions.
Overall, Indonesia is noted to be the most populated Asian country among the four from 2005 to 2015 and is projected to keep growing after a decade. On the other hand, Malaysia holds the place that is east populated in Southeast Asia between 2005 and 2015 and is believed to have the same trend by 2025.
In detail, at the start of the study, Indonesia had a total of 220 million people, followed by Vietnam at 83 million. The last two countries had lower figures where Thailand only had 65 million and Malaysia having a little under 30 million.
With this data, it is projected that in 2025, an increasing trend will be seen for each
country
putting Indonesia still at
first place as the most lived asian
country reaching at a peak of 260 million. This will be followed by Vietnam, Thailand and Malaysia, respectively.