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The response provides a clear overview of the data, highlighting key trends and differences between cities. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some repetition in vocabulary, which slightly affect the overall coherence and lexical resource scores.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Environmental Issues
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the yearly average levels of air pollution (measured in micrograms per cubic meter) in four major cities from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the levels of air pollution in each city over the given period.
Identify any significant fluctuations or trends.
Compare the air pollution levels among the cities.
Submitted Answer
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The bar chart illustrates the average scale of air pollution across four metropolitan cities around the world (New York, Beijing, London, and Delhi). Units are measured in micrograms per cubic meter.
Overall, It is evident that pollution
measurments
in the eastern urban areas are higher compared to western ones. To ellaborate
, Delhi has always had the highest number of polutants
in the air, with Beijing following with lower numbers. While numbers are significantly lower in London and New York.The
indian
capital had most
polluted air in 2015 with measurments
of approximately 90 micrograms per cubic meter, that is before it peaked in 2017 at around 95, then it continued to decrease till
2020. While beijing
ranked the second most polluted, it continued to decline constantly from above 80 in 2015 to below 70 micrograms 2020
.In contrast, The measured scores of the western cities has been on the lower end of the chart. The pollution level in the capital of the UK has fluctuated over the given years around the score of 20 micrograms. Similarly, New York has gone from just over 10 in 2015 to about 18 micrograms in 2020.