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Writing Task
#Transportation
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the annual expenditure on road infrastructure (in billion dollars) in four countries from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the expenditure trends.
Compare the spending between the countries.
Highlight any significant changes over the period.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money that needed for road infrastructure from 2015 to 2020 in five countries (Canada, Brazil, India, and France). Units are measured in
billion
dollars.Overall, France
spent
more money on road infrastructure than the other countries in 2015, as opposed to Canada. Meanwhile in 2020, India spent
most of their money on road infrastructure in 2020, while Canada who had the lowest. Furthermore, the most significant difference in expenditure between the four countries was on cameras.In 2015, France had the highest
spending
approximately 2.5 billion dollars on this as opposed to the
Canada at 1.5 billion dollars. While, Brazil spent
2 billion dollars and India expenditure was slightly below 2 billion dollars. By 2020, India become the most highest
on spending
annual expenditure which accounted for 3 billion dollars that was over double than 2015. Then followed by France that spent
under 3 billion dollars, Brazil for 2.5 dollars and Canada which was only spent
1.5 billion dollars.Examining the changes overtime, India show the rapid change that over 1 billion dollars in road infrastructure spending. On the other hand, the expenditure in France only increase below 0.5 billion dollars from 2015 to 2020. Both Canada and Brazil also
increase
0.5 billion dollars