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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Agriculture
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the percentage of agricultural land use in four different countries over a span of three years: 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Compare the percentage of agricultural land use in each country over the years.
Identify any countries with significant changes.
Discuss any trends or patterns you observe.
Submitted Answer
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The bar chart illustrates that four countries USA, Canada, Brazil, and China the percentage of
argricultural
land use in three years. The essay will reveal the comparations
among
those four countries
begin
in 2000 till
2010.In 2000 USA
reached
the lowest
level at 40 of argicultural
land and in 2005 reached
at 42 in
2010 was the highest
score at 45 percentage
of argicultural
land use. Next is Canada in 2000 was the lowest
score at 30 and in 2005 was at 32, the highest
was at 35 in 2010. Other country Brazil 2000 was at 55 for the lowest
and the highest
was at 60. In additional country is China in 2000 reached
at 50 percent used
of the field and the highest
was at 55 percent used
of the land.With the statements above the top country is Brazil which
reaches
the highest
land used
of the field year by year and continued with China, USA, and the last is Brazil which got the lowest
land used
of argicultural
field.The group two
countries
Brazil and China have got the highest
field used
in 2010 and significanly
increase year by year. The other country USA is still significanly
increasing and growing in the middle compare with four countries. In addition
the lowest
land used
of argicultural
is Canada
which reached
at 30 in 2000, 32 in 2005, and 35 in 2010.