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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)

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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data representation would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
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Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Housing
#Bar Chart
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households owning their homes in four different countries over a period of six years.
Describe the overall homeownership trends in each country.
Highlight any significant increases or decreases.
Compare the homeownership rates between the countries.

Submitted Answer

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The bar chart illustrates how many people who is living at their own house in the six years period of time from 4 countries, United Stated, Germany, Japan, and Canada. In percentage. Overall, it
shows
that Canada is the country with the highest owning house in the six years, followed by
United
Stated, Japan, and the lowest is Germany.
For over 6 years, the percentage of 4 countries seems consistent, except for Canada seems like to having a little increase in 2020 and still the highest with the percentage about 68% - 69% households owning their homes. The percentage of United State also just a slightly different for about 63% - 66%.
In the other hand, Japan and Germany just having about 60% and less than that. Compare to the 4 countries, Germany is the lowest with the significant gap about 28% with Canada as the highest percentage.

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