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The response accurately describes the water usage data for the five cities, with clear comparisons and a logical structure. However, minor grammatical errors and limited lexical variety slightly affect the overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
Describe the water usage in cubic meters per household in different European cities in 2020 as shown in the bar chart.
Summarize the key trends.
Identify any significant fluctuations.
Compare the water usage among the cities.
#Water Usage
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:3
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The bar chart displays the difference in water usage among 5 European cities in 2020, namely London, Berlin, Madrid, Rome and Paris, with water usage in Berlin the highest and London the lowest.
For the highest, Berlin consumes 320
cubic
metres per household, closely followed by Rome of 310 cubic
metres with a narrow margin of 10 cubic
metres. The bar chart also shows Madrid's water usage of 290, closely followed by Paris of 280. Noticely
, the range of the 4 cities is comparatively smaller compared to London with a dip of 40 bubic
metres from the 4th city
Paris. It is evident that the water consumption in London is significantly lower with only 250 cubic
metres of water usage, 70 cubic
metres less than Berlin per household per year.To conclude, the bar chart demonstrates the distribution of water usage in the 5 cities which is highly variable and uneven, prominently highlighted in the London section where the water usage is much lower.