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The answer provides a general overview of the income levels in various US cities but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. There are some grammatical errors and the vocabulary used is somewhat limited. The coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and logical flow of ideas.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Examine the monthly income levels in various US cities in the year 2022.
Summarize the monthly income levels in each city.
Identify the city with the highest and lowest monthly income levels.
Highlight any unexpected trends or anomalies in the data.
#Income Levels
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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The bar chart depicts the monthly income levels in USD in USA cities, namely: (New York, San Francisco, Chicago, Houston and Miami in 2022).
Overall, a lot of various trends can be observed from state to state depending on how much each household works
To begin with, it quite
clear
San
Francisco has the highest families earning significant figures approximately 7000USD. It illustrates to have achieved its peak income range based on the diagram.Whilst, Houston received the least earnings totalling to 4000 USD. It is almost half of San Francisco salaries, which explains a lot about the demographic difference in both states.
On the other hand, New York is positioned as the
second greatest
income receivers with approximately $6000, which is just a 1000 less than its peak standards.Chicago, is ranked third receiving a minimal of 5000 USD, beating Miami by roughly 500. This makes Miami occupy the fourth position.
Hence, it is
analyzed
that some states had greater perfomances
than the others, but all of them were above average. However, it is unclear to predict the future statistics.