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The response provides a general overview of the population growth in Australian cities but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The data is mostly accurate, but the description could be more precise and cohesive, with improved vocabulary usage.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Population Growth
#Bar Chart
The bar chart illustrates the population growth in five major cities in Australia between 2000 and 2020, measured in millions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant changes or trends.
Submitted Answer
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The bar chart compares the number of people in 2000, 2010 and 2020 in five prime cities in Australia. Overall, all the five cities
experienced
an upward trend, despite Sydney was
the most populated cities
till
the last recorded year.In 2000, Sydney had the most number with 4,5 million people and enjoyed
a
up to 0,8 million till
it reach
5,3 million
being the most populated in 2020. Similarly to Brisbane
who experienced
an increase to 0,8 million being 2,4 million in 2020 started from 1,6 million in 2000. Likewise, Melbourned enjoyed a dramatically rise
from 3,7 million in 2000 and reach
its peak to 4,7 million the
next 20 years.On the other hand, Perth and Adelaide
experienced
a slow buat
steady growth. Perth, in 2000 started from 1,4 million increased 0,5 million to 1,5 million in 2020. In the same way, Adelaide experienced
a gradually 0,1 million rise each 10 year
from 1,1 million to 1,2 million in 2010 and ended up with 1,3 million in 2020.