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The response accurately describes the data and provides a clear comparison of cultural event attendance rates. However, the coherence could be improved by better structuring the information, and the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance the overall quality.

Overall score	7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	8.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	7.0

Writing Task

#Cultural Participation

#Bar Chart

The bar chart compares the cultural event attendance rates in four European countries in 2021.

Describe the overall attendance rates in the given countries.

Identify and explain any notable differences between the countries.

Discuss any trends or patterns that can be observed from the data.

Submitted Answer

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The bar chart above provides us with the comparison of

cultural

event attendance rates in four European countries in 2021.

To begin with, we have four European countries in a bar chart: France, Germany, Italy and Spain.

In addition to this, France holds the leading role with 75 percent of the

cultural

event attendance rate, the next in a row is Germany with 60 percent, after we have Italy with 55 percent and the last one is Spain with its 70 percent of

cultural

event attendance rate.

From the bar chart, we can see that France has the highest

cultural

event attendance rate at 75 percent, placing it in the first position. Following France, we have Spain with a slightly lower rate of 70 percent, which is 5 percent below France's rate, putting it in second place.

The next country is Germany, holding third place with a

cultural

event attendance rate of 60 percent, which represents a 10 percent decrease compared to Spain and in the last place we have Italy with its 55 percent of

cultural

event attendance rate which is 5 percent below than Germany's rate and by the

way

the lowest

cultural

event attendance rate in the bar chart.

Overall, we can reasonably state that France is the most active country in

cultural

event attendance, followed by Spain in second place and Germany in third. The least active country is Italy.

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