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The response provides a basic comparison of cultural participation in Toronto and Rome, but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement.
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Cultural Participation
#Pie Chart
The pie charts illustrate the cultural participation in various activities in Toronto and Rome for the year 2022.
Examine the differences in cultural participation between Toronto and Rome.
Identify which activities had the highest and lowest participation in each city.
Discuss any notable trends or patterns in the data.
Rome
Toronto
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The above chart illustrates the cultural participation between Toronto and Rome in the year 2022.
Both countries
has
different percentage of participation in the cultural activities. In Toronto
usage of theatre has more compared to Rome. Whereas in Rome people has
showed
more participation on concerts. Both Toronto and Rome has equally less participation in dance activity.Rome has more percentage of
concert
with 30 percentage
of participation
whereas in Toronto only 20 percentage
of interest is shown
with the participants. And coming to museums with 25 percentage
of interest is shown
with the participation
and Rome has only 20 percentage
of interest in participating. In both Toronto and Rome equal percentage of participation is shown
with 15 percentage
of interest.As we see the chart, both Toronto and Rome
has
equal level of interest in participating in art exhibitions and dance performances. But that is the least interest shown
among all other activities. Most interest shown
are theatre and concerts. Which shows
interest of
these activities and its shows that these are in trending list which people like to do most in their free liesure
time as they find it more interesting and relaxing.