IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)

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09 Apr 25, 11:14
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The response provides a basic comparison of housing demand in Toronto and Vancouver, but it lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors. The vocabulary is limited, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking words.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors22
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource9
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Housing
#Pie Chart
The pie charts below illustrate the housing demand in Toronto and Vancouver in 2023.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.

Toronto

Vancouver

Submitted Answer

Words151|Paragraphs3
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The Chart given shows the different demand in Various Options
Housing
which is
Apartments
, Detached Houses, Semi-Detached Houses, Terraced Houses and Other Housing in two different cities which are Toronto and Vancouver in year 2023. Overall, These two cities have a familiar demand with a slight differences.
Apartment in Toronto have the largest percent for 40% compared with others. Followed by Detached house for 25 percent. In the
trird
place semi-detached house win by a 15 percent demand by
toronto
's
citizen
.
and
for the remaining amount of percent,
diveded
by two
kind
of percentage which are Terraced Houses and other Houses with 10% respectively.
However, In
Vancouver
apartment
is
have
a 5% more popular than flat in Toronto. As a result, Detached
house
is become less 5%. For the rest of housing demand is still the same
aas
in
toronto
like semi-detached houses, terraced houses and other.

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