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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5 (Academic Training)

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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in language. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while some data points are inaccurately reported.
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Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
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Lexical resource4
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Task response2

Writing Task

#Transportation
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the annual expenditure on road infrastructure (in billion dollars) in four countries from 2015 to 2020.
Summarize the expenditure trends.
Compare the spending between the countries.
Highlight any significant changes over the period.

Submitted Answer

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English:UK English
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The Bar charts provide information on the yearly expenses of the road infrastructure in Canada, Brazil, India, France. The data compare the Amount in dollar between the year 2015 and 2020.
Overall, India is the dominant in 2020 based on the annual expenditure While, France is the highest in 2015 and Canada is the lowest in yearly expenditure for both 2015 and 2020.
To begin with, In 2015, France became the top on the road infrastructure with 2.5 billion annual expenses, followed by Brazil, with 2 billion
dollar
and India is 1.7 billion and the lowest in 2015 based on the data is
canada
with 1.5 billion
dollar
.
In 2020, India is the highest expenses in road
infrastracture
with 3 billion dollar, second is France with 2.8 billion dollar and Brazil is 2.5 billion
dolllar
and Canada still the lowest in 2020 with 2 billion dollar yearly expenditure.

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