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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and changes. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Tourism
#Pie Chart
The pie charts below depict the percentage distribution of tourist expenditures in five different categories in Dubai and Singapore in 2019 and 2029 (projected).
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the changes in tourist expenditure distribution between the two cities.
Identify any significant trends or shifts over the ten-year period.
Dubai 2019
Singapore 2019
Dubai 2029 (Projected)
Singapore 2029 (Projected)
Submitted Answer
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THE PIE CHARTS SHOWS INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROPORTION DISTRIBUTION OF TOURIST EXPENDITURES IN FIVE DISTINCT CATEGORIES IN DUBAI AND SINGAPORE IN 2019 AND 2029.
AFTER
ANALYZING
THE PIE CHARTS, IT CAN BE SEEN CLEARLY THAT A NO DIFFERENCE WILL IN DUBAI REGARDING TRANSPORT, SHOPPING AND ENTERTAINMENT WHILE IN SINGAPORE IT CAN
BE ILLUSTRATE
THAT THERE IS A SLIGHTLY DECREASE BY 5% IN TRANSPORT EXPENSES ALTHOUGH INCREASE IN SHOPPING BY 5% AND ENTERTAINMENT WILL BE STILL REMAIN SAME.
ACCOMODATION
EXPENSES IN BOTH COUNTRIES WILL BE DECLINE BY 5%.FURTHER, THE PIE CHART DEPICT THAT IN BOTH
COUNTRIES
TOURISTS WILL LAVISHING
MORE MONEY IN FOOD AND BEVERAGE BY 5%. IN DUBAI AND SINGAPORE, THE PERCENTAGE OF SPENDING MONEY IN ENTERTAINMENT IS SAME AND WILL BE REMAIN
CONSTANT IN 2019 AND 2029 RESPECTIVELY.OVERALL, IT IS STRIKING THAT THE MAXIMUM AMOUNT OF WILL BE SPENT ON ACCOMODATION IN DUBAI BUT IN SINGAPORE, THE EXCESSIVE AMOUNT OF MONEY WILL BE SPENT ON ACCOMODATION AND FOOD AND BEVERAGE.