IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 7.5

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7.5
Overall Score
31 Mar 25, 16:11
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Overall Feedback

The response effectively summarizes the data, showing a clear understanding of trends and comparisons across regions. While the grammar and vocabulary are strong, the use of more varied sentence structures could enhance the overall coherence and cohesion of the text.
Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors9
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response1

Writing Task

#Health and Fitness
#Table
The table shows the percentage of children classified as overweight in various regions over a period of five years.
Summarize the trends in overweight percentages among children in each region.
Compare the overweight percentages across the regions.
Identify any significant changes or irregularities in the data.
YearNorth America (%)Europe (%)Asia (%)South America (%)
201820151018
201922161219
202021171320
202123181421
202224191522

Submitted Answer

Words190|Paragraphs15
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Cohesion
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Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Summary of Trends:
North America: The percentage of
overweight
children showed a
steady
increase from 20% in 2018 to 24% in 2022, with a minor dip in 2020.
Europe: A consistent rise from 15% in 2018 to 19% in 2022 without any fluctuations.
Asia: A gradual increase from 10% in 2018 to 15% in 2022, with
steady
growth each year.
South America: A
steady
upward trend from 18% in 2018 to 22% in 2022 without any declines.
Comparison Across Regions:
North America consistently had the highest
overweight
percentages, reaching 24% in 2022.
Europe had moderate levels, increasing from 15% to 19% over five years.
Asia had the lowest
overweight
percentages but showed consistent growth.
South America followed a pattern similar to Europe but had slightly higher percentages.
Significant Changes or Irregularities:
North America saw a slight dip in 2020 (from 22% to 21%) before continuing its upward trend.
All other regions showed consistent year-over-year increases without declines.
Asia had the fastest relative growth (from 10% to 15%), indicating a 50% increase over five years.
South America, despite its
steady
growth, remained slightly below North America in
overweight
prevalence.

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