IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

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The response provides a basic overview of the trends in renewable energy consumption but lacks detailed data analysis and comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary reduce clarity and coherence.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors14
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Environmental Issues
#Line Chart
The line chart illustrates the percentage of renewable energy consumption in four European countries (France, Spain, Italy, and Sweden) between 2005 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Describe the general trends for renewable energy consumption in each country.
Highlight any years with significant changes or fluctuations.
Compare the renewable energy consumption trends among the countries.

Submitted Answer

Words97|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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Renewable energy consumption trends in these four European
coutries
between 2005 and 2020 keep
increasing
steadily each year. There
is
no significant changes in percentage fluctuations trends with Sweeden as the most consumptive, starting from 30
increased
to 40 and 50 percent in roughly 4 years span, and hits the highest point of its percentage in 2020. Followed by those three other countries, Spain, France, and
Italy
with a much lower consumption percentages, with similar
increasing
graphic trends and also with less
increasing
percentage consumption each year. Each country
increasing
renewable energy consumption never surpass the other

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