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The response provides a basic overview of the trends in physical exercise hours but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while the structure could be improved for better logical flow.
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Writing Task
#Health and Fitness
#Line Chart
Examine the trends in the average hours spent on physical exercise per week by individuals in Australia, Brazil, China, and India from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the general trends for each country.
Identify any periods of rapid change or decline.
Compare the physical exercise trends between the countries.
Submitted Answer
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Phyisical exercise hours per week at countries, comparing Australia, Brazil, China, and
india
from 2010 to 2020.India being the country that leasts spend hours on physical exercise,
starting
from 2.0 at 2010, levelling up to 3.0 at 2020.China being one of the
sedentarious
countries in this list starting
from 3.0 at 2010 and ending up with a 4.4 at 2020, not to mention the country got stuck from 2015 to 2016 at the same ranking.Brazil being the third country
in
this list,
starting
with a 4.0
at
2010 and
leveling
up
at
2013 to 4.5, their ranking went down
at
2014 with a 3.9 but rapidly gained
it's
composture
again
at
2015
getting to 4.8
at
2020.
Australia
being
the first country with most
hours spent on phyisical
exercise on this list, starting
from 5.0 at
2010 and never getting stuck at any year, continuily
growing up, up to 7.0 at
2020.India
didn't
had
any stops when getting themselves higher at the rank.China getting stuck from 2015 to 2016 but quickly getting themselves onto the rank again.
Brazil having the most notorious stop between 2013 and 2015 at the rank but still being able to
possition
themselves again.Australia never had any downfall at the rank.