IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The vocabulary is adequate, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking of ideas.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
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| Country | 2000 (%) | 2005 (%) | 2010 (%) | 2015 (%) |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Canada | 75 | 78 | 80 | 83 |
| UK | 70 | 72 | 75 | 77 |
| China | 60 | 65 | 70 | 75 |
| Mexico | 55 | 57 | 60 | 62 |
| Russia | 80 | 82 | 83 | 85 |
| South Korea | 85 | 87 | 88 | 90 |
The table below provides data on the completion rates of secondary education in different countries for the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant trends or anomalies.
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Submitted Answer
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On the chart we can see information about secondary education.
There is six different countries
for four years.Firstly, the
persentage
og
completion rates increases
in all of the countire
throught
the years. South Korea has a
highest persentage
for the all four years, meanwhile Mexico has the lowest percentage.Moreover, China had
a
biggest and stable change during all the years, the presentage
is increases by 5% every year. South Korea and Russia has
same
change. During first five years from 2000 to 2005
persentage
in those countries
increases
by 2% after from 2005 to 2010 it is increase by 1% and
alstly
from 2010 to 2015 it
increases
by 2%, same how it was it first 5 years.
All other
counries
also had a change, but it is was
a little change. The rate increased
to 1-3%.Overall, all countries had a change in secondary
educaton
throuht
out 15 years.